PERSUASIVE WRITING BUMP IT UP WALL | EXEMPLARS | GREAT BARRIER REEF | YR 5

Help your Year 5 students bump up their persuasive writing! This Persuasive Writing Bump It Up Wall will help them see exactly what quality persuasive writing looks like and how to achieve it. This Bump It Up Writing Wall makes writing growth visible using A, B and C examples aligned to the Australian Curriculum.

With student friendly I Can statements and detailed teacher annotations that explain exactly what improves between each level. Model texts are written to build understanding of how to improve language features, objective and subjective language, text structure and vocabulary (the big wins!).

⭐What’s included:

• Exemplar Bump It Up texts that clearly show C, B and A level (Australian Curriculum aligned)
• I Can Statements writing goals
• Editable I Can Statements to add personalised learning goals
• Annotated model texts in addition to student examples
• Detailed teacher notes teacher notes that identify and clearly explain the evidence from the exemplars to show what has ‘lifted’
• Labels for the Bump It Up Wall.
• Colour and Black and White resources for flexibility.

⭐Bonus: Year 5 Persuasive Writing Marking Guide

The model texts are based on the topic of Protecting the Great Barrier Reef and show the growth of one text from C to A. However, they can be used to demonstrate quality writing in any persuasive writing unit. They support assessment, goal setting, and meaningful writing growth.

There are two parts to this resource – the students’ Bump It Up Writing Wall AND the annotated teacher exemplar texts.

⭐Why this resource is unique: The annotated writing exemplars and teacher guide will take the guess work out of knowing what to look for in your students’ persuasive writing. Every annotation explains exactly why the writing has improved informing feedback, teaching, moderation and assessment.

⭐Perfect as a guide for any teacher. Whether you are new to teaching, or have many years’ experience, you will find these annotations incredibly helpful to boost students writing!

⭐You can use the annotated examples to

• identify what to teach next,
• give explicit feedback to students about how to improve their writing and
• strengthen moderation decisions.
• explicit writing lessons
• moderation meetings
• teacher planning
• writing conferences
• student goal setting
• assessment and reporting
• parent discussions

⭐Why teachers and curriculum leaders love this resource:

• aligned to Australian Curriculum Year 5 English
• annotations clearly explain what improved and why
• supports consistent moderation and assessment conversations
• detailed annotations make knowing what to teach for writing growth clear
• clearly demonstrates the progression between C, B and A achievement levels
• designed from real classroom moderation and writing instruction by experienced teachers

⭐⭐See the pdf preview to view how the annotated notes help you analyse students’ writing to make decisions on next steps for teaching, student writing goals, and ensuring the moderation and assessment process is fair and consistent.

⭐⭐⭐Much more than a classroom display, this resource supports explicit writing instruction, moderation, and student self-assessment.

Grab your copy today and start bumping up your students’ writing tomorrow!

⭐OTHER BUMP IT UP WRITING WALLS AND EXEMPLARS YOU’LL LOVE:⭐

Year 6: Should Kids Have Mobile Phones? 

Year 6: Save the Koala.

Year 5: Protect the Great Barrier Reef.

Year 5: Should People Feed Wild Animals?